Ok, used the prompt for the most part on this one, but instead of writing about what I saw, I wrote about what I felt.
Here's the prompt:
Turn off the noise. Go to a window. Write what you see, feel and/or want in a stream-of-consciousness form.
The silence in here
Is the loudest I’ve ever heard
The absence of your baritone
The loss of your laugh
The desertion of your quiet anger
The walls are bare of colour
Despite your paintings still hanging
The flowers all died
In your wake
There’s no more music
Floating in the air
The stereo remains mute
A silent homage to your favourite pastime
Your precious vinyl
collects more dust than before
now that no one drags it out
in a weekly drunken laughter
to play a song
to piss off mom.
The tangled wires remain
A puzzled mess
She cannot hear the notes
She cannot absorb the lyrics
They all sing of her loss
And she is better off
With them remaining in memory
It all plays together
In my heart,
I cannot shut it down,
Though it’s out of tune.
And I gaze at the room
Knowing nothing is ever
Going to sound right
The silence in this house
Is the loudest
I’ve ever heard.
©2011
Image found at The Change Blog
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