Bits and Pieces....

Taking a break from my poetry run, I was searching through my WIP's, and what I've got posted as drafts on here. Remember Brent & Ali from Lover's Eclipse? That was my round nine story for Alison's Project Smutway. Anyway, I liked them a lot - but the story didn't give them much of a story besides mutual masturbation, which, don't get me wrong, can be incredibly hot. But I wanted to give them more of a life together (yes, they are based on actual people, so yes it's like living out a fantasy I guess...). So I started this little blurb. I think I'll work on this once school is done.

"Brent?" Ali's voice was barely a whisper as she snuggled closer to him.

His arms tightened around her, and he nuzzled her ear. "Yes baby?"

"Promise me..." her voice caught in her throat and she swallowed to clear the lump that had suddenly formed there. "Can you promise me one thing?" Without waiting for a response, she rushed on. "Promise me that if this...if we work out, that you'll never grow tired of holding me?"

He opened his arms long enough to turn her to face him. Lifting her chin, his hazel eyes gazed deep into her brown ones. "I can promise that I will never get tired of holding you." His lips softly met hers. "When something fits this perfectly - you never let it go."

Brent is what every woman wants - hot, arrogant, vulnerable, romantic, and dedicated - when the time is right that is. Which makes him just like every other man as well, stubborn and a royal pain in the ass. He doesn't pick up on hints very well either. Ali is (so I'm told) what every man wants - attractive, sexual, vulnerable and strong, with a big heart. I want to give them a happy ending.


Even if it is only on paper.